Double page spread draft 3

I changed the layout, which makes it look a lot more cleare and conventional. and disgarded the other image so their is just one.

Targets -: Edit image, so there isn't a gap.

Double Page Spread - Draft 2

I change the picture but I'm still not happy with it.
I also added a pull quote which fills up the space and change the colours of the stand first.

Targets -:

- Change picture
- Change layout.

Doublepage spread - Draft One

Target:

- Change right hand third picture because you can tell it's been photshopped bu it's finish
- Add more pull quotes

I will take all of these comments made by both teacher and peer into account and change aspects of the contents page which needs changing.

Peer Feedback

I like the colour's you have chosen to use they work well together, i like the way you have put a photo of the editors to as it gives the readers a look into what the editors do behind the scenes, i like that you have given a website to go on as readers can then buy their magazines online.
For an improvement you could maybe make all the text a little bigger as then it will catch the eye of the reader a little more.

Lauren Lewis

Peer Feedback

Ellie Broughton
Lauren I really like the amount of original photos you have put on your contents page and how you have kept the colour scheme, maybe you could use less space on the subscribing box and include something else. Just something to think about!